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Kin, the adorable fox



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PostSubject: Re: A.B.A. (comments and suggestions PLEASE)   Tue Aug 11, 2009 4:26 pm

"I HAVE THE POWWAAAAAAH!"

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terciel



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PostSubject: Re: A.B.A. (comments and suggestions PLEASE)   Wed Aug 12, 2009 4:33 am

-yawns- guess who left the wireless security codes open for a certain little foxie ^.^ kay gents, i wanna ask: who's everybodies favorite villian so far?
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PostSubject: Re: A.B.A. (comments and suggestions PLEASE)   Wed Aug 12, 2009 5:22 am

Don't really have a favorite villain but I like the dead dude. Just hope he and Skip might eventually get along. My other favorite is Sunny's character only because I'm biased. But the funniest one is definitely Kin!

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PostSubject: Re: A.B.A. (comments and suggestions PLEASE)   Wed Aug 12, 2009 5:40 am

Yay, I'm funny!

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PostSubject: Re: A.B.A. (comments and suggestions PLEASE)   Wed Aug 12, 2009 1:56 pm

deadman will has fans? -GASP- Rawk!
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PostSubject: Re: A.B.A. (comments and suggestions PLEASE)   Fri Aug 14, 2009 2:28 pm

sorry...

seems like the first time i asked whether anyone thought he was good, nobody liked him.
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PostSubject: Re: A.B.A. (comments and suggestions PLEASE)   Tue Aug 18, 2009 2:37 pm

Special A.B.A. bonus content:







this one was set to happen while nikole was out of town, but was removed because i wanted terry to be a 'pure' hero.

here it is in beta version for your enjoyment =^_^=:



"t-terry.... i want to ask you a favor...you can say no if you want but..." ember stammered, from the couch, unsure of how to ask her question

"ma petite, you have given me a home, and a bit of my past back, i would be honored to serve you." he answered, sitting sieza on the floor, relaxing.

"c-can you...."

"yes ma petite?"

"i won't ask you to have sex with me... but, just watching you... i'm having some serious tension right now and i need to let it out..." she said in a rush.

terry bowed very low, blushing slightly, "v-very well. order me, ma petite, and it shall be done."

ember bit her lip and paused, figuring out the phrasing, "terry makoto, i order you to sexually pleasure me until... i orgasm..."

he blushed a deeper shade of red and went to find the changing supplies. she raised an eyebrow, but he placed a finger to his lips, and she understood, laying down on the floor. he went to her, placing his burden next to her and slowly began to untape her diaper. the inside was wet, but not entirely from urine. he took a wipe, and gently cleaned her, and she jerked a little as it crossed the lips of her vagina. terry had her completely cleaned in a matter of minutes, and was at a loss as to pleasuring her.


"uh... how... how would you... prefer...?" he tried to ask.

ember blushed again and answered, "can you... lick, please?"

he spread ember's legs a bit more, and tucking his hair back, lowered his face to her crotch. slowly, he licked, from anus upward to her vagina, and upward again all the way to her belly button. she jerked and lifted up to meet him as he made the return trip downward, and he licked harder. it was too much and she tensed, he whispered into her ear, "hold it in, just a moment longer." and diapered her in seconds. she was nearly ready to cry from the pain of holding it in, but terry suddenly grabbed her and kissed her hard. she came just as their lips met and screamed silently into the kiss. by the time their lips parted, she was light headed and almost deliriously happy.

"thank you terry," she gasped, around the overwhelming orgasm.

"d-don't mention it," terry replied and sat down again.

ember sat up and placed a hand on terry's diaper, an erection obvious beneath the plastic.

"ma petite, don't..."

"terry makoto, i order you to... allow me to return the favor," she stated, matter-of-factly.

"no. i have no qualms about making you happy, but i will not make you an object of my lust. i have to refuse." he switched back to sitting sieza again, very placid.

"terry, the fact that you're getting an erection means that you're feeling tension too. i really don't mind and... it would make me happy if you'd let me."

terry blushed and stammered, "e-e-em..."

she grabbed him and wrestled him to the ground, and he didn't struggle, but just let her.

"ember please... i-i-i can't..." he whispered.

"just this once?" she tried her best to look sad when she asked.

terry nodded weakly. "j-just this once and then never again... and please, don't lick, i... don't want you to dirty yourself like that..."

ember slowly untaped terry's diaper and cleaned him, making his erection bigger, causing him to blush even more. she rediapered him, adding half a bottle of baby lotion, and began to rub.








This one was about deadman will, but was removed due to the fact that will, lacking blood, cannot go erect




that night, after the 'family' had gone to sleep, will lay on his mattress, thinking.
after a few minutes, he unzipped his pants, and pulled them off, revealing his diaper, darkly yellowed accross the front.
"i wonder..." he murmured, then spread his legs and placed his right hand midway down. he stroked slowly. building tempo, and causing the soaked gel to slide up and down his member. wincing, he placed his left hand over the right, and then squeezed his legs together, rocking a little, causing his diaper to make an audible sucking sound each time he did.
a tingling sensation traveled up his groin, and he gasped, his seed filling up the diaper, a small bit spilling out past the waistband.

he whispered to himself, "...well, that was fun, but now it begs some other questions..."




note: alpha version means the chicken scratch basics. beta means 'fixed up'. delta is the finalized material i post. and when i say gamma, it means perfect version, with added content. (several versions of evanessence were referred to by these...)
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PostSubject: Re: A.B.A. (comments and suggestions PLEASE)   Tue Aug 25, 2009 1:35 am

I am sorry if this seems rude but, I was thinking of reading this story and I got up to about two or three pages and I got tired and went to do something, now that was like a month or two ago. I was wondering if you could sum up what the story is so far, and like a lil brief plot summary, like the back of a book/DVD would.

But from what I read it seemed pretty good, I didnt really quite understand the male protagonist at all though?
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PostSubject: Re: A.B.A. (comments and suggestions PLEASE)   Fri Oct 09, 2009 2:48 pm

=^_^=





Everything louder than everything else pt. 3

Inside my mind with just my madness (Behind these walls of stone...)


"Boogeyman's mental journal, entry number: 5,248"



"Woke up, couldn't move. AGAIN..."

"Corsica forgot to feed me this morning... Am VERY hungry."


"Theyre running tests on the new version of tesseract today. I'm scared witless. I guess it's a good thing i'm not in control anymore, otherwise I'd probably have checked myself into a looney-bin by now, or something."


"I'm sitting indian style inside my own head, Man this feels wierd."

"Hm? It's a flute, maybe I'll play for a little whi- OH! A BUTTERFLY!"

"Whoops..."

"Did I just get distracted in my own head?"

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..
...

"EH!? Feeling nauseaous... Yuck! This stuff tastes terrible."

"I'm being 'force-fed'? Yes. Yes I am. AND It's illegal drugs... Damn you .... At least get the FDA to approve this..."




And thus boogeyman's thoughts flitter from one to the next, poor soul that he is...


But who is Edward Serpiente really?
Just a pawn of corsica?
A hero in his own way?
Or just another vagabond?


Even he doesn't know anymore.
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