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PostSubject: my stories   Tue Nov 03, 2009 8:46 pm

some of you with FA accounts may have already seen them, but i do have some stories that i have written myself. for those of you who hadnt seen them, i can post them here.

however.............
they arent exactly grammatically correct. that is i dont really bother with capitalization and commas too much.
english was always my weaker subject and whatnot, but thats ok. i have fun writing them anyway and thats really all that mattters.

i do use paragraphs and quotation marks though, so i try to put some effort into them. when i post them onto a site like FA, i use word to help ind the errors and i fix em


anyway, heres a list of my stories i have so far and if anyone wants to read em, i'll post them here


digimon:
renamon tf/regression, status: complete
this one is one of my favorite digimon stories. a boy finds a pair of renamon gloves in his locker after a card battle with his friends during lunch and tries them on, only to find he gets turned into a renamon. the second part involves him slowly regressing back into a little kid, or kit i should say, it does leave a cliffhanger for your imgination to work it out

joey the agumon, status: incomplete
back when i was nothing but agumon. this just a story of becareful of what you wish for. joey wishes to be an agumon after watching a digimon 01 marathon and gets his wish granted

fur:
the life of joey the otter, status: incomplete
this is my biggest one. its still got a lot to go on it, i think i have about six chapters out of my desired ten. its quite big and i cant quite summarize it all without tellin the story.
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PostSubject: Re: my stories   Sat Nov 07, 2009 2:45 pm

the life of joey the otter
(it was the best working title i could come up with)

chapter one: a new beginning


It was a cold November day, as an 20 year old colledge student, Joey, sits in his apartment room studying for his exams and doing his homework.

"Man, this is inhuman, how do these people expect us to do all of this work? They pile more and more on us every year" Joey said exhausted, as he collapsed face first onto his desk.

As he laid there exhausted from all of the work, he suddenly hears a knocking on his door.

"Now who could be knocking on my door?" Joey asked himself curiously as he got up.

He walked over to the door and opened it up only to find no one there.

"Now thats strange, I coulda sworn someone was there a minute ago" Joey said to himself confused.

He turns to close the door and finds a note nailed to it. he looks at it curiously and reads it.

"Notice to all tennants, due to the rising cost of utilities, rent will be increased by fifty dollars effective immediately. We apologize for the inconvinience, signed, the landlord" Joey read to himself.

Joey clenched his left hand into a fist and punched the door with all his migh. He manages to punch a small hole into the door and rips the note off the door with his right hand and rips it into little, tiny pieces. He then storms back into his room and sits at his desk. He knocks all of his books and pencils off of it as lays face first on the desk trying to calm down some.

"this is ridiculous, its hard enough to do my schooling and my job at the same time, I cant offer up anymore free time for work, I just can't do this!" Joey yelled to himself in annoyance

He took some deep breaths to help calm himself and got up and walked to his closet. He pulled out his jacket from the closet and put it on.

"Maybe a walk is all i need to cool off" Joey said to himself with a slight depressed tone

He walked out of the apartment and closed and locked his door. He then proceeded down the stairs of the building, then walked out the front door into the cold outdoors. He looks around see's the freshly fallen snow and walks along the sidewalk heading down to the park. As he walks, he see's some kids in a backyard having a snowball fight with each other and having fun. He stands there and watches them some.

"If only i could ever be young again, then i could put off all of this stress till i'm more ready for it" Joey said with a slightly sad tone

He continued to walk down the the sidewalk till a sharp, cold breeze started to blow. Joey quickly ran inside a nearby store to escape the cold. As he walks in, he see's that the store is dimly lit, is full of cobwebs, barely has anything on its shelves. He scratches his head in confusion as to the condition of the store.

"Good day, sir. Please feel free to have a look around the store" a mysterious voice called out to him from behind

Joey turned around and jumped up as he saw an old man in black cloak with dark glasses on.

"Sorry if i scared you, i tend to have that effect on people" the man said as he walked over to the register

Joey nodded and just walked around and looked at the merchandise. Everything there was, was covered in a to of dust and were quite old and worn. Joey was about to leave the store, when he noticed something quite strange. It was an otter plush, but what made it strange, was that it looked quite new. It didn't have a speck of dust on it and neither did it look as though it were in dissrepair. Joey picked it up and looked at it, as the shop keeper watched with a smile.

"I see something has caught your eye." the old man said to Joey from across the room

Joey looks up at the old man and nods, "Yeah, i found this plush otter, it looks new actually" Joey said to him a bit confused

"Why dont you come around back with me?" the old man asked

Joey was unsure knowing most horror movies involve a person following strange looking people to places such as that, but goes anyway knowing it was real life and not a movie. As they reach the back, the old man turns to Joey.

"Theres a reason as to why the otter plush seems so new" the old man says with a grin

"What is it?" Joey asks curiously.

"It's what you desire most" the old man replied

"What I......desire most?" Joey asked confused

"You may not know it, but it is" the old man replied

Joey just stood there dumbfounded by what the shopkeeper had told him.

"Perhaps i need to show you" the old man replied to Joey's confused look

Joey only just looked at him even more confues. The old man began chanting some words, but he couldnt make out what they were though. Joey began to feel all dizzy and next thing he knew, everything went black.

"Am..... am i dead?" joey thought to himself as he was still in the darkness



(well, i hate to end it there, but each chapter is big, and only way i can really do it is in parts. i will try to get another part in tomorrow though whenever i can. feeedback on my story, thus far is appreciated)
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PostSubject: Re: my stories   Sat Nov 07, 2009 3:52 pm

I'm looking forward to this.
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PostSubject: Re: my stories   Sat Nov 07, 2009 3:59 pm

thanks, its the rewritten form of the one on FA, so i'm doing my best to make it better and improve upon stuff in it.

not too easy, but it is coming along better than the first one did. but thank you for the feedback
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PostSubject: Re: my stories   Sun Nov 08, 2009 4:54 pm

Joey soon found himself back into consciousness and found himself staring at a light blue painted ceiling.

"Odd, i dont recall the shop having a painted ceiling, where am i?" Joey asked himself in his mind

he sat up and looked around his surroundings and notices something quite odd

"I'm in a crib!?" joey thought to himself in shock

Not only was he in a crib, but a bright blue nursery, containing a chnging table next to the crib, a closet, a shelf stocked with diapers, wipes, powder, changing pads, and plastic trash bags.

"this no make sense" Joey said in a babyish tone

Joey immediately put his hands over his mouth. As he did he could feel his mouth was different, it felt like a muzzle. He looked at his hands and saw that they were now covered in brown fur. He then saw his feet were now brown furred paws and that he was in a sleeper withfish designs on them. Joey sat there inshock of all that he was seeing and starteed to panic a little and tried to back away. As he backed away he pulled his new tail a little hard, causing him to yelp loudly enough to be heard by the nearby baby monitor.

"Whats goin on hewe? None of dis makes any sense two me" Joey said in fear of what had happened

In all of his panic, he suddenly felt a growing warm, wetness spreading around his waist some and realized yet another thing, he was now in a diaper. Joey started to panic now, as he continued to wet his new diaper and being unable to control it. Just then his bedroom door styarted to open up and Joey became startled causing his diaper to bulge out in the back and stink some. A tall female anthro otter walked inside his room and looked over at him. Joey became scared by this and dove under his blnkets in fear shook. The otter walked up to his crib and picked him up while wrapping him up in the blanket. Joey just shook more and began to whimper as the otter put her finger against his muzzle

"Shhh.... dont be scared little one, its ok, i',m not gonna hurt you. Your probably just a little startled by everything that has happened is all" the otter told him in a soothing and calming tone

Joey started to calm down as she started rocking him in her arms and humming a soothing tune to him. She carried him over to a mirror so he could see his reflection. Joey looked into the mirror and was surprised by what he saw. He saw that he looked much like an otter, only more human like the otter holding him, but much younger, like a baby.

"Are you ok little one?" the female otter asked him caringly

Joey looked up at the otter with cute looking eyes and nodded.

"Your soo cute" the otter said to him as she nuzzled him

Joey giggled and saw he was being carried off to the changing table

"Who is you?" Joey asked the otter

"Me? my name is sarah, but you can just call me mommy" Sarah replied to Joey as she sat him on the table

she pulled out a changing mat and spread it out on the table and laid Joey on it. She unbuttoned the bottom of the sleeper and untaped his diaper. Joey blushed heavily being changed, Sarah got out some wipes and cleaned him up good and put them in his used diaper. She rolled it up and threw it in the nearby diaper pale. she picked up the baby powder and shook some onto Joey. Some powder blew over onto his nose causing to sneeze cutely.


"Bless you" Sarah said as Joey sniffled

She grabbed a new diaper and unfolded it. She lifted up Joey's legs and slid the new diaper under him and threaded his tail through the diapers tail hole and folded it up around him and taped up the sides.

"There, all clean, feel better?" Sarah asked Joey as she rebuttoned his sleeper.

Joey nodded and looked at Sarah, "Me name is Joey mommy"

"Pleased to meet you Joey" Sarah said

Joey was about to ask her some questions but got distracted as his stomach growled loudly enough for both of them to hear

"Sounds like somebody is hungry" Sarah said as she picked up Joey



(well heres another part to the story, hope you all enjoy it so far)
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PostSubject: Re: my stories   Sun Nov 08, 2009 11:03 pm

Yes, am enjoying so far. Only thing I can criticise is he seemed a little fast in accepting all this, but I know the story is written already so too late to change anything.
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PostSubject: Re: my stories   Sun Nov 08, 2009 11:41 pm

thanks, i can fix that in its final form, but thats why i'm posting it to get ideas for improvement
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PostSubject: Re: my stories   Sun Nov 08, 2009 11:50 pm

Ah very cute. I gotta say I like it thus far. It's pretty good. No real big spelling errors and I didn't notice any grammar errors so good work. I'd say keep it up and keep writing and practicing.

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PostSubject: Re: my stories   Mon Nov 09, 2009 3:50 pm

thank you, i am trying my absolute best at all of this, this is my favorite story i am working with
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PostSubject: Re: my stories   Mon Nov 09, 2009 9:17 pm

Seems pretty solid so far but I do agree with Roilu on the acceptance issue.
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PostSubject: Re: my stories   Mon Nov 09, 2009 9:31 pm

i will work on that then, thanks for the feedback on it though
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PostSubject: Re: my stories   Wed Dec 16, 2009 3:37 pm

Joey just nodded as he looked around trying to think of how this was even remotely possible, but couldnt think of anything to explain it. Sarah just petted joey's head as she carried him into the kitchen.

"Does me hwafta sit in a highchaiw?" Joey asked curiously

"Yes, you hafta sit in a highchair, you too little to sit in normal chair" Sarah replied with a smile

Sarah then set the tray down and tied a bib around Joey's neck. Joey blushed some under his fur at having to wear a bib as Sarah walked to the cabinent to get his food out for him to eat. Joey looked over at sarah to see what she was getting out, Sarah pulled out a jar of pink colored mush.

"Is dat bwaby food?" Joey asked with a look of disgust

"Yes, sweetie, it is, your too young still for solid foods, and until then you'll need this" Sarah replied with a smile

She opened up the jar and immediately Joey could smell the food due to his new nose. Joey started sniffing the air liking the smell of the food.

"It smewws wike shwimpies" Joey started as he started to drool a little being hungry for the food

"Thats because it is shrimp" Sarah replied with a slight chuckle

She picked up a plastic spoon and walked over to Joey and got a spoonfull of the food and heldn it up to his mouth.

"Open the tunnel for the train" Sarah cooed to him

Joey opened his mouth some and took a small bite of the food and found that he liked it. He then proceeded to happily eat up the food as Sarah continued to feed him each spoonful till the jar was empty and eventually licked clean by Joey.

"Looks like someone enjoyed breakfast" Sarah replied looking at Joey

Joey smiled and nodded with his face covered with all of the food, Sarah chuckled at the sight of this and wiped his mouth clean and picked him up out of his highchair

"Well, do you wannna watch tv for a little bit, Joey?" Sarah asked him curiously

Joey nodded his head curious as to what shows this world had. Sarah carried him out into the living which was modest sized. It had a couch big enough for three people, a couple chairs, a playpen, a large flatscreen tv, dvd player, a collection of dvd's, a few lamps to light the room at night, and few decorative pictures on the wall of rivers and lakes. Sarah sat down in one of the chairs and sat Joey on her lap and turned on the tv. Joey watched as the tv turned onto the news, but was a bit confused as the writing at the on the screen about what the news was about was in som,e sort of gibberish to him.

"Lets see if we cant find you some cartoons to watch" Sarah replied as she picked up the remote

"Why cwant mwe wead any of the witing?"Joey asked sarah curiously

"You just dont know how to read our language yet, but everyone is born with the knowledge to speak and understand it verbally" Sarah replied

"Oh" Joey replied understandingly

Sarah continued to flip through the channels looking for a cartoon for him to watch.

(finally, an update. took me long enough)
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PostSubject: Re: my stories   Wed Dec 16, 2009 9:14 pm

No worries. Still very cute.
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PostSubject: Re: my stories   Wed Dec 16, 2009 9:39 pm

yeah, been wrapped up with this and that, mostly procrastination. just cant back into the feel of writing, which is why i have delving into art, i've recently got three favs. today on my most recent art, iguanafish
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