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PostSubject: furr high (Kais style)   furr high (Kais style) Icon_minitimeThu Nov 30, 2006 8:59 pm

as requested by kari ive rewritten furr high.

im sorry kari but the notes you gave me were a little 'limited' so i had to improvise. if this wasnt what you expected then ill try to change it as best i can.

The clouds hung heavily on her shoulders as a silver fox gently pawed her way towards the school. Her books in her arms as she walked her eye never leaving the ground. He bag strategically placed to cover the slowly growling stain along her right side. All around her she could hear the fast chatter of the cheer leaders, the macho bolloks of the jocks and their girlfriends. All she had for company was the quiet rustle of her already slightly damp diaper with a heavy sigh she turned into the school making her way towards the steps up to the main door. Her caste her crimson eyes over the crowds over the seas of blond, brown, black and other hair and fur colours. As she turned back towards the door he wished for a school year that wouldn’t turn to hell like the other years. With another loud sigh he walked through the doorway. She was greeted by the blast of warmth from the huge radiators as she walked down the middle of the corridor. Both sides coated in lockers and the occasional stair way as she weaved in and out of the crowds searching for her old locker. From one angle she spotted her friends a liger and a Godzilla like creature, leant against the lockers a vulpix lazed as they talked. She turned trying to get a better view as the vulpix and liger exchanged a hand shake before the vulpix shot off faster than she could blink. She sighed as she looked over her clothes one last time. Her black skirt and white tee-shirt. She found her locker. The metal door coated in red paint the black graffiti showing though like eternal cursed marks. As she slowly spun the dial she could hear the lock clicking and opening
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The door opened with a low screech. What she saw made her gasp with surprise. Gently folded a demin jacket was placed in the locker a small note placed on top she looked around her as she picked up the note
“Who left this?” she muttered to herself softly as she cast her eyes over the crowds. The vulpix stood there between 2 huge bulls of the football team his eyes hidden behind a pair of blue tinted sunglasses. She blinked as once again he disappeared like a cloud of dust. Written in delicate handwriting the note stated
‘My jacket will help hide the blood stain on you shirt’ it red ‘don’t lose it’. She quickly put it one. The arms already rolled up to her elbows as if who ever had left it had guessed how big she was. The only clue to who it belonged to was the aquila badge on the back. She smiled gratefully as she dumped her bag in the locker only leaving out her book. As her locker closed she was met by 2 familiar faces
“Hey Kari.” A liger and Godzilla said in almost perfect unison. The Godzilla was leaning on the liger like he was a post. She blushed as she jumped, her tail fluffing up in fright as with a giggle she threw her arms round the 2 boys necks
“Lig! Kiru! I’ve missed you!” she cried out as she hugged them
“Ok Kari we’ve missed you too” Lig said struggling a little
“I CANT BREATHE”” Kiru spluttered his face going a small shade of blue as he struggled to breath. She let go of them blushing as they regained their composure. She began to feel a little ill as her head began to spin. They quickly noticed
“Kari? Are you ok?” Kiru asked confused as she lost her balance. She shock her head is it flooded with thoughts and her eyes began to white out.. she straightened up and gave a wide grin and a thumbs up roughly in the direction they were standing
“I’m fine” she said before her eyes rolled and like a log she fell backwards. Luckily for her rabbit friend and a foxcat walked up behind her.
“Hey Kari are you o…Aaaaaaaaarrrrrrrggggggghhhhh!” the fox cat keala cried out as kari fell back into her arms.
“Huh?” bun the rabbit asked confused a little “what happened?” she asked
Worried as she knelt down beside the now seated catfox. Lig quickly dropped beside them as kiru froze. Unable to move as she groaned softly her red eyes opening a little
“Keala?” she asked softly
“Yeah?” she replied a little unsure
“I don’t feel too good.” She whispered softly her voice a mere mew of what is usually was her roar
“We better get her to the nurse.” Lig said quickly as between them, keala and lig dragged Kari up to her feet and carried her away. Bun and Kiru quickly followed behind. Bun had a little grin on her face. The symbol on the back of the jacket told her who it was from. Kiru noticed as he walked beside her his hands in his pockets as he casually followed behind them
“What’s so funny” he asked as they walked. With a little blush she squeaked
“Nothing… nothing” in reply. Between them only the crinkle of their diapers could be heard as they walked with their friends. With a heavy knock they burst open the door nearly blowing it off its hinges with the force they hit it. a lone Siberian tiger meeped as she looked at her door. she rushed over ignoring the girl between her friend as she inspected the door
“My lovely door!” she cried out loud “you ruined it!”
“excuse me! But I think your missing the big picture here!” lig shouted back indicating the girl between then
“Oh dear what happened?” she said lifting kari up and carrying her to a bed. As she removed her hand from under the jacket she noticed the dampness. As she lifted her and she saw her pure white fur tainted by the deep red of blood. Her mind raced as she tried to explain what was going on to herself
“She fainted outside.” Keala said quickly standing beside the bed. Lig stayed back as the nurse removed the jacket and tore open the silver fox’s shirt
“Oh my word…”


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PostSubject: Re: furr high (Kais style)   furr high (Kais style) Icon_minitimeThu Nov 30, 2006 9:14 pm

Not bad. Not bad at all. I like how this is going so far. OH but I did see one typo.

“Oh dear what happened?” she said lifting kiru up and carrying her to a bed. As she removed her hand from under the jacket she noticed the dampness

That Kiru should be Kari. Anyway it's a good story so far. Keep it up.
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PostSubject: Re: furr high (Kais style)   furr high (Kais style) Icon_minitimeThu Nov 30, 2006 10:09 pm

lol nice redo!
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PostSubject: Re: furr high (Kais style)   furr high (Kais style) Icon_minitimeFri Dec 01, 2006 11:30 am

yes he did well redoing it and for that i am gratefull and lig is it ok if i have her sent home with you
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PostSubject: Re: furr high (Kais style)   furr high (Kais style) Icon_minitimeSun Dec 03, 2006 2:29 am

i would also like for my character to be female.
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PostSubject: Re: furr high (Kais style)   furr high (Kais style) Icon_minitimeSun Dec 03, 2006 12:02 pm

keala- done.sorry i forgot your furisona is female
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PostSubject: Re: furr high (Kais style)   furr high (Kais style) Icon_minitimeSun Dec 03, 2006 5:05 pm

dont forgot this fact also kaela is also part demon with horns and wings mention that in the next chapter if there is one ok?
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PostSubject: Re: furr high (Kais style)   furr high (Kais style) Icon_minitimeSun Dec 03, 2006 5:36 pm

ok first i dont mind reminders of forgotten furisonas but demands on what they look like really pisses me off

im sorry i know that you didnt mean anything but writing a reminder like that is quite frankly rude and insulting

so please I would like any furisona info that i might have forgotten... that goes for all of you.
heres what i have from kari
Kari- white top, crimson eyes and hair,
Lig- jeans, blue top, brown eyes, brown hair,
Kiru- jeans, brown eyes, brown hair,
Keala- cat/fox ½ demon- jeans, light blue eye, blue hair,
Bun- white top, pink skirt, blue eyes, blond hair,

oh and keala? can your wings be used for flight?

1st, if you want me to continue kari? if so then IM what you want in your next chapter
2nd, every thing i write for this will go through kari. and before any one asks i will NOT have magic in this


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PostSubject: Re: furr high (Kais style)   furr high (Kais style) Icon_minitimeSun Dec 03, 2006 5:38 pm

Kaiskune got angry!!!
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PostSubject: Re: furr high (Kais style)   furr high (Kais style) Icon_minitimeSun Dec 03, 2006 7:24 pm

sorry bout that.
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PostSubject: Re: furr high (Kais style)   furr high (Kais style) Icon_minitimeSun Dec 03, 2006 7:33 pm

no probs keala, heat of teh moment on my account

so...are your wings used for flight or not
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PostSubject: Re: furr high (Kais style)   furr high (Kais style) Icon_minitimeSun Dec 03, 2006 7:34 pm

Ever see my ftt av recently? thats my fursona's wing size. ok?
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PostSubject: Re: furr high (Kais style)   furr high (Kais style) Icon_minitimeSun Dec 10, 2006 7:00 am

well it took a while but i got it written... its a bit big but i thikn its ok

i know its missiong something but thats coming int eh next chapter

“Looks like some one needs a clean diaper?!” the nurse squealed as she pushed the others out of the room and pulled some curtains behind then the sounds of the tapes being torn open screeched through Lig’s ears like claws on a chalk board. Keala rolled her eyes with annoyance as once again the nurse completely missed the bigger picture
“This is gonna be a long day.” She groaned as she flexed her wings.
The nurse poked her head out of the curtain looking at the Lig and Keala.
“Lig? Be a dear and get me a diaper out of that cupboard” she asked softly. He walked up to the cupboard and slowly opened it…
“Sweet mother of…!” he stammered as his eyes widened in amazement. The cupboard was full of diapers, all different sizes. From the ultra discrete furdry ‘Red Dwarf’ to the ultra thick fluff-fur ‘super fluff’. Keala looked at him as his eyes practically turned to the classic anime eyes as he almost started drooling over the discovery.
“Lig? That diaper please.” The nurse asked from behind the curtain
“Um…um any preference?” he asked timidly his eyes not leaving the stock pile.
“Judging by her waist id say 3rd shelf down. 4th along” she called out as he pulled one off the pile and walked up to the curtain thrusting his hand through the gap in the curtains. He felt the diaper being taken as he withdrew his hands and closed the cupboard again he could he Kari struggle a little as the nurse diapered her and poked her head out of the curtains again
“Lig, please go to your lesson and inform your teacher that Keala and Kari will not be in lessons today.” She said as she looked at keala “you’re staying her because I’m sending Kari home with you and you also need a diaper change.” She chirped. As keala blushed hard her tail slipping between her legs like a nervous kit as she nibbled her lip. The nurse grabbed a bandage. As the curtains were removed she saw Kari sat up on the bed wrapped round her waist the bandage held snugly in place with a few safety pins. She deep into kealas eyes worried at how she would react as the nurse pulled up chair and a note pad
“So Kari… what happened?” she asked quietly. Kari looked down thinking of how to put it
“I was walking to school when I was jumped and when I ran I cut myself.” She lied hopefully. The Siberian tigress frowned as she wrote down her own ideas.
“Uh huh.” She grunted as she reached for a cup of coffee taking a long draught. As sighed as she forced a smile and looked at Keala “now! What about your diaper?”…

At the end of school Kari and Kale waited at the nurse’s office. By the time Lig and Kiru got there. They could see that Keala was getting impatient as she flicked her tail angrily her wings flexing every couple of seconds begging to be released outside. The idea of 6+hours in a medical facility was not appealing in the slightest to her
“Are you ready to go?” Lig asked timidly the sight of the angry Cat/fox striking fear into his heart. She grunted an affirmative as Kiru walked over to Kari offering a arm to lean on
“We got your homework from the teacher.” He said calmly passing over kari’s book and pulling out Keala’s. The look she gave him made him quickly put it back in his bag with a nervous meep.
“so where are we going?” Lig asked as they left the office
“Well we need to get Kari back to mine first” keala said quickly as she dropped by her locker grabbing her bag and threw to over her shoulder. Kari had put on the jacket she had found in her locker after the nurse had given her a spare tee-shirt.
“Where’s bun?” she asked as they walked along. Despite feeling like she had drank 8 cans of beer she had noticed buns reaction to the jacket she was wearing… she wanted to know who had lent her it.
“Oh! She’s gone meet us at the football field.” Kiru replied as they walked out of the main doors. Behind them the school. The main building in the middle of a huge campus. The building scattered round the campus specialised in each subject with science having a building of its own like music and drama shared one. The I.T department having the newest with the latest tech. in 5 scattered buildings students that lived away form home could rent the school dorms. 2 were sanctioned for male, 2 for female. The 5th was not very popular (surprisingly) as the mixed dorms. While the rules were a little stricter there the fact that they were slightly cheaper to rent made up for that fact…however… the fact that the student who was in charge of ruling the place was very good at launching clipboards at people…well… there’s nothing you can really equalise that argument. To the left of the main building next tot eh staff car park the tiny administration building stood… in the best of ways it looked like shack. By now the clouds had dispersed and the sun shone though the broken clouds like a heavenly message. The path ways were full of chattering students as they either headed for home or the dorms. They could see the depression the field was built in from where they were as like salmon up a stream the struggled against the flow of people heading towards them. sat on one of the grass banking Bun sat a small book in her hands as she pretended to read watching the football team practice. Out of all the team one stood out. From all the huge bulls and lions that forms the team there was one weedy looking player. 12 etched into the back of his shirt as like the rest of the team he practiced not in full football kit, but a soccer shirt with the team logo on. his multiple tails swishing in excitement
“12! Break and catch!” One particular bulldog shouted. As the 2 6-a-side teams formed up. The small player taking positions on the line. The response he got was a the loud laughter of a huge bull that stood opposite him
“You think you can stop me?” it scorned as the little player took position.
“SET!” the bulldog shouted. the players legs were already going…
“HUT! HUT!”… The little player had gone. Like a cloud of smoke he had disappeared as the bull dived where he was supposed to be. The bull lost balance as he feel flat on his face as the quarter back aimed for a certain area. With a lightning reaction he threw the ball flying straight like a bullet. 12 was finally noticed… he had spun round the bull and started running for the posts. His eyes hidden behind a blue eye shield as he ran knowing completely where the ball was going to land. There was that many scents coming off the ball he could simply smell it as it flew
With a strong flex he jumped into the air his arms out the ball flew into his hands. He wasn’t fast enough when he landed as from 3 side s he was tackled with a sickening crack…. Out of the blue music began to play from the pile of bags. Crawling from the pile 12 pulled off his helmet as he rushed over and dived into his bag long hair flopped form his helmet as the vulpix that Kari had seen all day reviled himself his bold blue eyes shining in the light as he dug for his phone

Kanjita you ni yattetai na
Taishitamon ja nai ze right now
Kankiwamatte kazashita my hands
Kanshou babe be survivor

Nanno kanjou mo nai you ni kizutsuke atte iku doushi
Tada risou ippo de mo chikazuku you ni hibi saku wo roushi
Nani ga seikai ka nante sa shitta kocchanai ze
Sekkaku hirogaru michi ha meikaku shinjite na dream maker

Na, nagen no kai? Saken no kai?
Shimei wo kanjiteru

Love for life, drive for light gunjoiro no sora
Cry for fight, smile for bright kirisaite kou na
Love for life, drive for light asu ga miesou da
Cry for fight, smile for bright shaking your heads
(be survivor, ZZ)

“Yo” he grunted as he answered his call. Kari’s eyes widened as she recognised the player
“Oh hey Tanya what’s up?” he chirped happily “No im training… yeah I should be back I a few hours… a curry would be nice… yeah with rice… what?... oh top draw, I think I have a few left… yeah if you can… you know the type I like… oh Ha Ha!... I gotta go Tanya… yeah back to training ill see you tonite”
He closed the phone with a sharp slap as he looked up and noticed the gang
“OH hey guys what’s up!” he asked as he climbed the banking shaking hands with lig
“Wait a minute!” keala stammered “Since when has kais being on the football team!” she demanded. Kais looked at her confused
“Where have you been for the last year?” he asked in a pure British accent
“Not to a football match.” She snapped as she looked him over. his left shirt sleeve was torn from the tackle… the same symbol from the jacket burnt into his arm like a fire brand
“Oi!!! Kais! Anytime this year!” the bulldog screamed as him…the team was getting restless
“Oh crap.” He grumbled “look I’ll have to talk later ok. Better get back to training cya.” He cried as he bolted back towards the forming linesmen. Grabbing his helmet as he ran past like he was grabbing a football. As he rammed it on his head the group turned away bun in tow as they left the school. Huge grin on her face as when they hit a cross roads they split each taking a separate road Keala with Kari in tow as they walked along.
“Holy…” Kari swore as they turned into a side road… a large house stood before them. not huge but big enough for a very large family (I’m thinking round about 6 kids)
“I always wonder why everyone I bring home does that.” Keala sighed as she headed for the door pulling out her keys… a little diaper key chain hung from it causing Kari to laugh as the door opened. The entrance way was huge. The stair case directly in front of them. Beside the left. Next to a door leading to the kitchen a small table was set. On top a note.

‘Keala,
Gone away for a few days. Money is in the cookie jar. If you have a party clean up afterwards

Love
Mom and dad’

A great smile grew on keala’s face
“OOOOOOHHHHHHHHHH HHHHHEEEEELLLLLLLLL YYYYYEEEEESSSS!” She shouted at the top of her lungs. Sweat began to drop from Kari’s neck as she shuddered a little. “Do you know what this means?!”
Kari shock her head meekly

“SLUMBER PARTY!”

“Uh oh…” Kari mumbled as keala helped her up the stairs and into her bed room. A double bed sat in the middle of the room. The walls covered in posters, a computer sat next to the bed and a large TV hung from the wall
“But first…” she said digging round her dresser and pulling out a pink sleeper and holding it up for Kari to see “lets get you dressed”

5 hours later…

“No way!” Bun cried giggling like maniac as keala depicted her first date
“Can’t be true” Kari stated calmly… a little embarrassed over wearing the sleeper. Who knows why… bun was wearing one and so was keala. They didn’t care… they were having fun. Their giggles and cries were drowned out as they heard the roar of an engine as someone turned into the drive. As the engine shut off they all poked their heads out of the window to see their faithful liger friend climb off the back of bike. A trio of pizzas in one hand as tied the helmet onto the back rest and walked towards the door. They heard him bang on the door as Keala pulled out her phone and send a text message to Lig…seconds later they heard the door open and close as the bike roared into life once again and the rider turned on the spot and shot off
“Pizza delivery!” lig shouted up the stairs as he made his way up to her room. It wasn’t hard to find… follow the fits of giggles. He nearly jumped out of his fur when he saw all the girls sat around in their sleepers… he blushed hard as he flooded his diaper in surprise… the warmth round his crotch not helping.
“Girls” keala said with a big smirk
“Yeah?” bun and Kari asked starting at lig… ‘that look’ on their faces
“we got our selves a liger to get ready!”…
“NO girls.” Lig cried out “Please have a heart!” he begged as kari pulled a red sleeper from under the bed. Keala and bun got up advancing on the terrified liger as he scrambled for the door. He cried in horror as they grabbed his tail dragging him back into the room… the classic claw marks down the carpet as his dug his claws into the floor… the door closed…
*RIP!*
“Ohhh girls! The little liger is wet!” keala squealed
“No girls that’s alright!” lig begged
“RIP!”
“There goes his shirt!” Kari shouted
“Lets change him!” bun said
“NO… really!” he begged
*Tapes ripping*
“Ohhh get the wipes and powder!”
*wipe*
“Arrrrrrrrrrrggggggg!”
*powder*
“What should we put him in?” bun asked
“Well me and Kari are wearing those really thick night time diapers.” Keala suggested
“Oh!!! They’ll do fine!”
*a very thick diaper is unfolded*
“Jesus… how thick is that thing!” lig cried out
A few minutes later the front door opened again…
“Awwww how cute!” bun squealed as the bed room door opened again… kiru stood at the doorway a bag in his hands. His eye brow rose as he saw the liger sat in the middle of the room his arms crossed as he pouted. Dressed in a bright red footed sleeper the obviously thick diaper between his legs as he growled to himself. He quickly put 2 and 2 together working out what had happened
“I hope you happy.” Lig snapped as the girls noticed kiru their demon horns popped out again as if on strings… he quickly pulled off his jacket revealing a green sleeper.
“No need girls… I came prepared.” He said sighing in relief as they sat back down and began tearing apart the pizzas that Lig had brought over. By 11 all 5 of the them were sat around in sleepers of multiple colours when bun noticed the jacket on a stand
“So… have you worked out how lent you the jacket yet?” she asked… as the night drew on. Kari shook her head as she looked out of the window.
“What if he doesn’t want to be found?” Lig asked hiding something
“I want to thank him.” she said crawling up to Lig resting her head on his shoulder making him uncomfortable “do you know who gave me it?”
“N…no…” he lied. keala grinned as she sat on the bed, kiru on her lap as she fed him a bottle. (So they had a little bet… so what?)
“Your lying.” Keala chirped menacingly as she let kiru off her lap as she got up. “Bun… get the rope… we’re gonna get him to talk!”
“OH no please!” Lig cried as he backed for the door once again. At once all the girls pounced on him.
“Got him!” bun shouted as she struggled with his hands pulling them together as keala began wrapping the rope round his hands restraining him.
“So what are we gonna do?” Kari asked. Kiru watched over from the bed… with a shrug he put the bottle to his lips and began drinking again. Keala pulled out a feather
“Tickle torture…” she said evilly
“No… please!” Lig begged as the feather was ran along his foot. Within seconds he was laughing like a maniac as kiru began tickling his ears and bun began to tickle his tummy.
“No. *laughter* please!.... hahahahahaha im not gonna talk!” he roared over his laughter. The girls grinned as like a trio of demons they picked up the pace. He flooded his diaper as he laughed unable to control himself as they held fast whie he struggled
“are you gonna talk?!” keala giggled as she stopped a minute
“*Pant pant* yes… yes… I know who lent you the jacket *Pant* it was…”


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OMG! WHO WAS IT?!
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PostSubject: Re: furr high (Kais style)   furr high (Kais style) Icon_minitimeMon Dec 11, 2006 4:43 pm

if you read teh story carefully theres about 5 clues in it
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of course i ahve long figured it out right kais
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Hmph, be like that...
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bun i just said who it was
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Ooooh
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well... later than i expected to get this posted but i got it done. sorry its a little short

Luck must have been with Kari that week. As after school had ended she passed her mysterious guardian as he walked towards his home in the school dorms. As he passed her his eyes passing right through her as if he hadn’t seen her she mumbled before asking quietly
“Why?” Kari asked calmly... With a grunt her secret lender spoke
“I know the feeling of pain… I know how hard it is to hide it.” Kais muttered his eyes facing forward as storm clouds gathered
“But” she begged turning round. Kais stood there his back turned to her his 5 tails flickering silently as he stood not moving
“But what?” he sneered “why didn’t I give it to you personally? Why do I not act like your best friend?” his harsh words hit her as tears formed in Kari’s eyes. With a sigh he turned removing his sun glasses as she hung her head. A delicate finger gently lifted her chin as she cried. He stood before her in a black jacket. A black tee-shirt with a 2 headed dragon on his chest underneath
“I know your pain… I know the feeling of rejection. But that is all I feel” He said softly as he took of his jacket and placed it over her shoulders looking deep into her eyes. Slowly he moved closer to her as rain began to fall around them. Gently their mouths met as he gave her a gentle kiss on the lips. Her eyes wide with amazement and fear as he held his lips against hers... As he broke away they stared at each other for long seconds as he turned away a slight grin forming on his face as he moved away
“Don’t get any ideas.” He growled quietly to her as he walked away “you’re not my type”
“not… your…type?” she uttered softly to herself as the vulpix disappeared into rain softly she could hear him sing

I’ve lived my life in a cage
Freedom spit in my face
It was such a disgrace
And I was lonely
Burnt out and empty
Desperate

I had my head in a noose
I had nothing to loose
Had enough of abuse
So now I’m dangerous
Hate’s so contagious
It owns us

I’m angry
I’m raging
I’m breaking through the pain

his words were drowned out by the rain as she stood frozen to the spot for long minutes before she turned her hand over her mouth as if savouring the kiss. The new jacket. The feel of his warm body against hers his strong arms around her…it was all gone as she tried to remember the feeling while she walked home.

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After the heavy rain fall the next day was surprisingly pleasant as like most days kari walked to school. Today was different. Sghe was in a good mood. Her walked with a happy skip and her friends noticed
“Wow Kari! What brought this on?” Kiru asked was he walked beside her. it had honestly been a long time since he had seen her so happy.
“I donno I just feel…great!” she nearly screamed as she bound up the stairs into the school hall. Deep inside a locker kais dug around
“Morning kais!” she chirped as she passed him playfully slapping his ass as they passed. Beyond the slap she easily heard a rustle under his pants. With a startled yelp he jumped bashing his head against the roof of his locker
“SON OF A!” he cried out grabbing his bag an obvious blush on his face as he turned and ran. Slamming his locker as he bolted from the group. kiru looked at the vulpix as he bolted from view, Kari was rubbing her hand trying to remember the feeling as Lig and Keala turned up.
“Morning.” They said in near unison giggling at each other… kiru was the first to speak
“what…just happened?” he asked Kari as the group looked at her. Her face covered in shock as she realised what it was…
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LIKE OMG!!!
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wasnt that shocking bun Razz
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another chapter done. a little short but done

im hoping to finish this story off within the next 1 or 2 chapters so this one is near to a close

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“I can’t believe that Kari!” Lig said with a little annoyance “that just doesn’t sound true!”
“What?” kiru asked a little confused.
“That sounds cute!” bun squealed with joy the rabbit nearly jumping on the nearest person.
“I’m telling you guys he does!” she defended loudly. Lig shook his head as he turned to his meal ripping a chunk of meat from his sandwich and eating it
“He’s not the type.” He said calmly
“Kais wears diapers! I felt them!” she said loudly. A muffled whisper sounded from behind her. She turned to see a pair of cheerleaders standing behind her… she gulped as they had evil grin on their faces…they were the biggest gossips in the school. Others over heard and fell into quiet whispers. Just at the point kais walked into the food court. His eyes hidden by his classic blue tint sunglasses. His jacket a new skin tight cycling jersey.. In most aspects he was taking a break from training he felt the uneasy silence as over 100 pairs of eyes (not including glasses) fell on him as he walked along. The 2 cheerleaders burst into giggles as they saw him. One of them stood on her chair
“Hey! Diaper boy had a change yet or should I do it for you?” she shouted as a roar of laughter burst from the crowds. Lig and company unusually silent as he stopped. Kais’s usual unemotional self broke… a slight grin spread across his face as the laughter quietened down to giggles.
“Hey… cheerleader?” he said loudly his eyes facing forward as he passed the foolish girl. “Has been fucked the resident chimera killed off your brain cells or do you live up to the dumb blond personality?” he asked back clear as day. The crowds silenced as he effortlessly jumped onto a table in front of her. “Do I look like I wear diapers?” he inquired. The cheerleader smirked
“Your pants are pretty loose you could hide them under them.” she said. The crowd nodding in agreement.
*RIIIIIP!* with a short tug kais tore his pants off. A pair of cycling shorts covered his crotch as he looked down at her. Forcing himself to not smile at her gawping jaw as she stood shocked by his very public reaction to her accusation. A huge roar of approval blew from the far doors. The entire football team stood watching as with a dismissive salute he hopped off the table walking towards his team. As high fives were cast he walked out of the cafeteria.
“Well.” Lig muttered to no one inparticualar “I guess that clears that up.”

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Later that day Kari decided to confront Kais about what she knew. She waited for the final bell to ring she sat anxious in her seat. Her feet rhythmically tapping the soft drum beat that emanated for Kais’s desk. He had it on so low that even the most keen eared creature in the class couldn’t hear the lyrics. She watched him as he wrote. He sat 2 fingers against the side of his left eye as his hand twitched with the gentle brushes of writing. His writing flowed onto the page like a soft lapping wave betraying the rough and punishing sport that was one of his pass times. She looked at the clock once again. They had 10 minutes left and nearly every one had done their work. Minutes seemed like hours in this boring and uninspiring room. The most she could do was look out side. The birds gathering on the football field. The janitor cleaning some of the bins with a pressure hose. The head master patrolling like a soldier watching for anyone no in lessons without a pass.

Finally… the bell rang its eternal glory summoning the end of the school day.

As the last of the students rushed from the class room Kari sat on her desk. Kais had easily noticed her urge to talk and like a dutiful friend waited. The teacher watched with anticipation as Kais got up and sat on the desk opposite Kari. His fierce eyes effectively pinning her tongue against her jaw. A small smile broke on his face as he got up and started to walk for the door. when he realised that Kari was not following he turned his head
“Hey…Kari? You coming or not?” he said calmly. She jumped up and rushed after him as he walked down the corridor his hands in his pockets his jacket open revealing a bare chest of light brown fur. down his chest from his shoulders a curved White of fur had formed as he matured. His five tails were stiff as he walked along stopping at his locker. The Hall was already bare…only the shadows lurked now
“Kais…I…I” Kari started as he opened his locker
“So you found out my secret…” he said casually “you shouldn’t say things like that out loud in the cafeteria. You should know that by now.” He pulled out a bag and pulled of his jacket the Aquila on his arm shone brightly in the lights as he stuffed the jacket into his bag and carried walking
“I’m…I’m sorry” she begged “I won’t do it again!”
“I know you won’t” he said seriously his eyes never leaving the doors in front of them “I have a enhanced body” he said calmly “I have 2 hearts and an extra kidney.” He stated as they walked. Kari didn’t realise why he was telling her
“What does tha…”
“The kidney has a slight defect that doesn’t mature until I reach 21… that defect affects my bladder and control at night” he cut in as they walked. She nodded slightly as they walked. “My room mate advised me to wear protection while I sleep so she didn’t have the change the bedding every day and I guess they sunk in…”
“So… why don’t you go out with someone with a similar defect?” she asked hopefully. Kais stopped and turned to her
“Tanya is my roommate and friend nothing more.” He said slightly angry “like I said… your not my type… stop trying” he turned away walking towards the dorms
“Why?!” she demanded “Why am I not you type?!” her own anger raging
“I know what independence is… you have yet to learn, you know one secret but not my biggest” he said puzzling her as he walked way. His eyes burned with fire as he walked back to the dorm he lived in. she watched him tears forming in her eyes as he fell from her view. With a gasp for air she turned rubbing her eyes angrily
“I wont stop trying” she swore to her self as with turned and stormed off.
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