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PostSubject: Not So Sweet Sweets   Mon Oct 16, 2006 5:55 pm

(This is a furry story btw)
PArt 1!!!! AHH!
Riiiiing! Riiiiiing! Riiiing!
The school bell finally rung. It was the end of the day and I was already asleep during my boring Algebra class. Lucky for me I sat in the back and practically knew the lesson plans for the day. I packed my things into my bag as my teacher, Mr. Pulken, told us our homework.
"Remember class, on Monday there will be a quiz! So study hard this weekend!" It was like he was talking to no one. Mr. Pulken was the kind of guy taht wouldn't yell at anyone. But there was this one time when a girl from my class get on his nerves he went ballistic on her. She was crying. So no one made trouble during Algebra class.
I left the classroom and headed into the hallway, swarming with many students. I saw two of my best friends, Yin and Sasi (Sasee). Yin was a white tiger with black stripes. Her parents were from China nd she was born here in America. She was top of her class and didn't have any enemies. As for Sasi, he was the kind that would make trouble even if he didn't try. Like this one time, he was walking down the hall and he accidentally tripped and fell over on the teacher. Her coffee stained his nice yellow fur. he couldn't remove it for weeks!
They both weren't in my homeroom. That was really sad because we hung out a lot. Heck, our lockers were next to eachother.
"Hey guys!" I said to them.
"Hey Onny!" They said.
"Do you guys have plans for tonight?" I asked. Today, Friday, was usually the day we went to the movies or studied at my place.
"Oh sorry Onny, but my mom wants me to stay home after that little incident..." Sasi said. I remembered it. Sasi was almost accused of burglaring (sp?) when he found candy on the floor and picked it up. We all panicked, but everything was okay when they did an inventory check. But the only thing wrong was taht they were home WAY past their curfew and were in big trouble.
"Oh too bad... How about you Yin?" I turned to her, with eyes that were begigng her to say she could come.
"Okay, but i have to come around later because I have some errands around the house, you know how strict my mom is." She said. That was true. A few days ago, when I went to her house for a sleepover, her mom was so strict that we weren't allowed to even SLEEP. She was telling us that drooling was bad for us, and sleeping on a sleeing bag would mess up our fur, and she even insisted that we read a book. Pffft, read a book? Heck, the last time I read a book was....I don't remember but hat's not what's really important!
"Okay Yin, I'll see you later!" I said as I waved to them good bye. I walked into the crowd and out the doors.
I took the normal route back to my home, through the neighborhood shops. All the owners of the shops knew me. They pracitcally gave me free stuff. I yawned, still feeling tired from Algebra.
I started to do some window shopping to see if there was anything I would like. I saw cute adorable plushies and some cool gizmos I could give to my 5 year old sister, Rachel. She was good with these little contraptions.
Then I saw it. A box of chocolate and candy. Perched up against the window of the neighbrohood's local pastry shop. It seemed like any normal box with normal chocolate and candy inside it. But it was as if a strange aura has lured me towards it. I went into the store and the bell on top of the door rang.
Old Mr. Peters, sat behind the counter, looking as cheerful as ever. I have come here a lot when I was a kid, I'd buy a lot of candy and he'd always say stuff like, "Don't forget to brush your teeth, you wouldn't want to get cky bad cavities now would you?" Mr. Peter's was an aging and balding goat. He wore small spectacles on his nose as he peered up at me.
"Why isn't this a nice surprised! Hello Onny! Here for the usual?" He asked. Okay so I've been here everyday, so what?
"No thanks Mr. Peters! I just wanted that box of chocolate at the window." I said pointing at the box.
"Okay just let me see now," He got out from behind the counter. He still had a healthy figure. He picked up the box and looked at the cover. He inspected it at first. Then he raised it to his face with his spectacles pressed against his eyes.
"Is something wrong Mr. Peters?"I asked curiously. I've been very curious my whole life, which gotten me into some trouble. I don't want to get into details about that.
"This isn't one of my items....how did that get here?" He scratched his head in confusion.
"I'll take it anyways Mr. Peters!" I said reaching both paws out for the box.
"Okay Okay, just remember to Brush your teeth okay? Wouldn't want you getting cavities." He said. See what i mean? Everytime I came by and bought something he said something like that.
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PostSubject: Re: Not So Sweet Sweets   Mon Oct 16, 2006 6:05 pm

LOL. I like this one its funny. I can't wait to see more.
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PostSubject: Re: Not So Sweet Sweets   Mon Oct 16, 2006 6:40 pm

Part 2! Wait, what was that? AHH!! STAY BACK! NOOOO!!!

He handed me the box and I left the store. I felt tempted to eat the chocolate right where I was standing, but I resisted the urge. I slowly approached home. I felt so exhausted. It felt like I ran in a marathon. The truth is I did run in a marathon before but I was dead last, I had to walk all the way to the finish line. Even the OLD women beat me... Heck, I get exhausted by walking the stairs up to my bedroom!
I reached into my pocket and took out the house keys. There were alot of keys to choose from. The house key, my bedroom key, the bathroom keys, the garage door keys, the car keys (I don't know hy but I just have them), the cupboard keys, and other kinds of keys. I have already gotten use to the shape and colors of the keys so it took me a few seconds to get the right key. When I was younger I couldn't tell which key was which key and I ended up waiting for my mom or dad to come home to open the door for me. Sometimes my mom and dad would be out at work or spending times with their friends.
I unlocked the door and checked if anyone was home. "Anyone hoooome?" I asked as I opened the door. It was dark inside, none of the lights were on. So her parents and sister were not home. Rachel was probably at one of her friend's house playing dress-up or tea party or something. I turned on the lights in my home and walked up to the white board our family kept to make sure where we all were. I looked on it. Yup, my guess was right, my parents and my sister were with friends and wouldn't be back until 10:30 pm. That was plenty of time for me and Yin to study and have some fun or gossip about boys.
I went to the living room and plopped my bag on the floor. I sat on the sofa and stared at he box of chocolates. I liked my lips with anticipation. I wondered whether if or not i should eat them... I gave into my urge to eat sweets and took off the cover.
"Huh? What's this?" I said as I saw a big paper marked WARNING in the box. I unfolded it and read out loud: "This is a box of rare chocolate from Furitopia. If you aren't a Furitopian then don't eat it. WARNING: Children under 10 years of age should not eat this. Caution: Side effects may be produced when eaten. Side effects vary from different Furres."
I scratched my head in confusion. What was Furitopia? What was it talking about when it said side effects? I was just too curious to ignore it! I picked up one of the chocolates from the box and examined it. It seemed like normal chocolate. I popped it in my mouth and was absolutely amazed by the taste.
"WOW! This chocloate is delicious!" I said. I couldn't describe the taste, it was like all the sweetest things I ever tasted, mixed together with a pinch of warmth and paradise! I ate another. And another. And another. And another. I ate 7 more. So now in the box there were only 13 left. I felt oddly full and tired. Well I was already tired from the walk home, but this was the kind of tired as if you haven't slept for a day, you know? I turned on the television and randomly channel surfed from channel to channel. I stopped on one of those soap opera's. I don't know why but it seems so weird to me. I just don't understand these soaps.
I yawned once more and concentrated on the soap opera. I started to nod in my sleep. The words of the actors just became the lullaby of my sleep. Soon I fell asleep on the couch. The box of chocolate started to glow strangely....
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PostSubject: Re: Not So Sweet Sweets   Mon Oct 16, 2006 6:53 pm

Nice. Wonder what those side effects will be. I bet she wakes up far smaller then when she fell asleep.
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PostSubject: Re: Not So Sweet Sweets   Mon Oct 16, 2006 6:54 pm

OWMAGAWD HOW DID YOU KNOW?!
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PostSubject: Re: Not So Sweet Sweets   Mon Oct 16, 2006 7:05 pm

I'm read minds. Very Happy Like yours! MUHAHAHAHAHA!
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PostSubject: Re: Not So Sweet Sweets   Mon Oct 16, 2006 7:46 pm

Part 3! What are you doing with taht carrot?! OMG! NO! NOT IN THE FACE!

The box emitted a blue aura and it started to disappear, but the aura still remained in the empty spaces. The empty spaces suddenly emiited a red aura and it spread on to my body. I didn't notice a thing as I was alseep. To tell you the truth I could sleep through a hurricane. Not that I ever tried...
My body was covered in the strange red aura. My body seemed to shrink and so did my clothes. It was as if I was flipping back in a photobook of my life in reverse. Like I was falling up instead of down. What was happening to me? I could never know until I woke up.

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I opened my eyes. What time is it? I hope I didn't sleep so long that Yin came by and I wasn't awake to open the door. I decided to get up and see what time it was so I got off the couch. But something as wrong. I fell off of it. That was weird, I never fell off of it like that before. I got up uneasily and felt dizzy. Everything in the room spun and looked bigger. I closed my eyes to stop the spinning.
When I felt I could open my eyes again I looked around me. Everything WAS bigger. I looked down at myself.
Everything wasn't bigger, I was SMALLER. In fact I wasn't only smaller, I was physically smaller. I moved around and heard a crinkling noise. I turned around quickly and scanned the room. Nothing was there. The lights were off. I guess my parent's and sister were home...THEY MUST BE RESPONSIBLE! Must be my sister using one of her contraptions on me... Oooh, when I get my tiny paws on her...I'm gonna, I'm gonna...do something horrible.
I shook the idea out of my head and walked around some more. I continued to hear the crinkling noise. I didn't know here it came from. It was driving me crazy! It was like the sound Jason made, like Chi Chi Chi Chi Chi Chi Chi Ke ke ke ke ke ke ke ho ho ho ho ho ho. once my friends made that noise in my house and I didn't know where it came from and I was really scared.
I continued to search for the mysterious noise. The last place to look in the living room was the closet. I know there isn't a bogeyman, but if I can mysteriously became younger then there is a possiblity a bogeyman exists. I slowly reach for the handle and stopped. What if there was one? I shrugged and got my curious instincts. i turned the knob and opened the door.
I looked into a mirror that was in the closet for a long time. It looked as if it was newly made. That was weird, it was worn out and collecting dust. I looked at my reflection and was scared down to the bones.
I was the size of Rachel. I was wearing my clothes, but they were different somehow. I noticed a bulk in between my legs. I touched it and finally figured what I was wearing and what the sound was.

It was a diaper. I started to scream my lunges off.(<----DREAM)

I opened my eyes again and saw that I was in a dark room. My mom entered the room.
"Aww, did my Onny Bonny had bad dream again?" She asked. My mom never talked to me like that before. She turned on the lights. Then I suddenly realized what was going on. I WAS A BABY!!!! Somehow that nightmare must've became real. This room was made for a baby. it had a crib, a changing table, a big closet, and a few toys and stuff laying around everywhere. My mom picked me up and cradled me. I noticed I was crying. I never cried this hard before. My mom cooed and shushed me. My crying became les and less of a nuisance and I fell asleep again.
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PostSubject: Re: Not So Sweet Sweets   Mon Oct 16, 2006 8:01 pm

I like it. Can't wait to see where it goes from here.
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PostSubject: Re: Not So Sweet Sweets   Mon Oct 16, 2006 8:02 pm

I'm gonna stio for today =P Sowwy
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PostSubject: Re: Not So Sweet Sweets   Mon Oct 16, 2006 8:09 pm

Thats Ok. I usually dont' write that much in a day myself. I usually write somthing over time and then post it. That story of mine is one I already had started. I didn't write it on the spot.
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PostSubject: Re: Not So Sweet Sweets   Thu Oct 19, 2006 7:02 am

i like it..although reptitive...i always love these storys in high hopes of them coming true!
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PostSubject: Re: Not So Sweet Sweets   Thu Oct 19, 2006 1:44 pm

Omg i love it it rocks i wish it'd happen in real life though but it is awsome^^
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PostSubject: Re: Not So Sweet Sweets   Thu Oct 19, 2006 4:32 pm

Lets face it we all wish this would happen in real life. If I woke up tommarow as a little cub fur I'd be so happy I'd probably wet myself.

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PostSubject: Re: Not So Sweet Sweets   Fri Oct 20, 2006 1:25 pm

*giggles uncontrolably* dito here^^
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PostSubject: Re: Not So Sweet Sweets   Sun Nov 12, 2006 2:17 pm

(I wanna add you guys in sooo much now! Maybe the next part *wink wink*)(I wanna try something new)

Part 4
A carrot is ment to be eaten, not to be used as a weapon.
-Says a man who died choking on a carrot.
A carrot is ment to be used as a weapon, not to be eaten.
-Says a man who choked another man with a carrot.

(Story starts here)

The morning sun began to rise, the chirping birds flew across the vast skies. (I'm a poet and didn't even know it =P) The sun slowly crept up through the windows of all the houses. Folk of all kinds began to awaken, from the tigers to the mouses.(Ok no more poetry)
I began to awake as the sun crept into my room. Wait, wasn't I in the living room? Why does my head hurt so much? I rubbed my sore head with my paws only to realize that the nightmare I had wasn't neccarily(SP?) a nightmare. I really did become a babyfur, sleeping in a crib. I cried to myself wondering when, or if I'll ever, become my normal self again. My crying must've been heard because my mom entered my room.
"Mom! I don't know what happened! I don't know how I became a babyfur!" instead of that this came out: "Mommy! I dun know what happeeened! I dun know how I beecame a babeefuw!" I felt so embarrassed. My mom must've still been tired and didn't understand what I said, or I was talking babytalk.
"Did Onny Bonny have another nightmare? I know what'll cheer you up!" My mom pulled the bars to my crib down and left the room. I could hear her feet thumping on the stairs as she made her way downstairs. I heard some clanging and other noises. I was really confused. What noise was that?! Soon I can hear my mom coming back upstairs.
From the hallway she said,"Close your eyes and say Aaaaah." I did what she said, expecting a lollipop or something. Soon she as in my room. I was wrong about getting a lollipop. Instead I got something else in my mouth. I couldn't tell what it was so I bit on it. A warm liquid flowed into my mouth. The taste was so familiar, but I couldn't put my finger on it. I bit some more and before I knew it I was done. The object was taken out of my mouth and I began to open my eyes.
First I saw my mom kneeling in front of me. I started to look down and saw in her hands, was a bottle. I actually drank some liquid from a baby bottle! Who knows what she made me drink!
She smiled and patted me on the head, in between my ears. She picked me up and put her finger in my visible diaper. She tsk-tsk-ed and carried me to this big table. It all happened so fast, next thing I felt new the bulk in between my legs were gone and then a larger one replaced it. I looked down and saw it was a pink frilly diaper!! My mom picked me up again and tickled me a bit. I giggled. Why did I have to be so ticklish..? That was my one and only weakness!!! Next to Kryptonite of course (just kidding). My mom stopped and carried me elsewhere. She carried me to the kitchen. Already seated at the table was my father. He was already in his business suit, eating some toast. There was a highchair next to him. Weird, wouldn't there be two highchairs? One for me and one for Rachel? I still thought about it as my mom placed me in my highchair, tying a bib around my neck.
"Wachel?" I asked all of a sudden.
"What was that honey?" My dad asked.
"Where Wachel?" I asked again, still disturbed by the way I talk.
"Oh don't you remember? Of course you don't, you're still a babyfur. Rachel went to college!" My dad said happily. This is very weird, now I was the family's babyfur and Rachel goes to COLLEGE?! She's still 5 years old for pete sakes.
As I was thinking I felt a spoon getting inserted into my mouth. I lost my train of thought and ate whatever was fed to me. Ewww....Babyfur food....disgusting! When my mom was done feedng me she wiped my facefur clean of the babyfur food's mess. She got me another bottle and allowed me to drink it myself asshe ate her breakfast. Their breakfast looked so good....I stared at their breakfast as I drank from my bottle, noticing that it was orange juice.
"Well, time to go! I'll see you two ladies later!" My dad gave my mom a kiss and a kiss for me on the forehead.
"Bye-bye Daddy!" I said. That felt normal to me as I always said that whn he left to go to work. Then it hit me, mom had to go to work today also! Then what would happen to me? My mom released me from the highchair and carried me to the living room and turned the TV on for me. Ewwww....Barney.....Lucky for me it was just about over. As the credits rolled past my eyes I saw what was up next, Carbears! Yaaaaaay! I haven't seen this cute adorable show in years! I coudn't believe that they still showed this! I fixed my eyes on the screen as they showed Carebears. Mymom came back when the opening song was over. She turned off te television set. I whimpered and pointed at the television.
"Onny....you have to go to daycare! Mommy and daddy won't be here to watch you. And Yin or Sasi won't be abe to babyfursit you." When she mentioned Yin and Sasi I wondered if they were 20 years old or something. My mom held her hand out for me and I took it. It was the first time this morning she allowed me to walk. She helped me onto my feet and pulled some shorts over my diaper. (Note: Onny was wearing a pink shirt with a bunny head logo on it) We walked out the door.
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