Maxis
Number of posts : 2898 Age : 32 Localisation : Raccoon City Registration date : 2006-12-30
| Subject: Forgotten Tue Jan 22, 2008 12:14 pm | |
| *A smokey room, a dimly lit stage, Max arrives dressed in all black, turtleneck sweater with his thin dark glasses placed on the end of his muzzle, a beret, black as well. He steps up to the mic and silence falls...* " Forgotten Listen close, quiet down The voices whisper all around You can’t see, but do you hear? The voices far, the voices near The ghostly notes, unseen singing Soft and dull, the voice is ringing A faint whisper through your head As soft as pillows, as heavy as lead The voices sounding Repeating, Astounding! You can’t understand a single word But the entire story is clearly heard Why are there no faces to this song? No imagery to carry on The voices come from corpses rotten Behold the song of the Forgotten Listen to the beat of the street Listen to the sound pound Look around, find no one there No not here, not anywhere Just to save them, no one tries Broken dreams, severed ties Don’t want to believe the lies Want someone to hear their cries Forgotten, those who were loved and cared Now alone, hungry, and scared No one there to feed their souls Their eyes hollowed to empty holes So if alone yourself you find Make sure you aren’t left to far behind ‘Cause when they move, they wont be stoppin’ And you just might be forgotten " *People snap* "Thank you, Peace" *Max walks away* | |
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Lig Head Kitten
Number of posts : 11138 Age : 36 Localisation : Pensalvania USA Registration date : 2006-10-15
| Subject: Re: Forgotten Tue Jan 22, 2008 12:40 pm | |
| Wow Max that was fantastic. Nice job. Your pretty good with poetry. | |
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Raikan
Number of posts : 927 Age : 34 Localisation : You dont need to know that, keep walking. Registration date : 2007-06-04
| Subject: Re: Forgotten Tue Jan 22, 2008 12:40 pm | |
| *Snap snap snap, fingers clicking as he raises a lighter in hand* cool cat.. | |
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Poco
Number of posts : 856 Localisation : High in the Rocky Mountains Registration date : 2007-03-11
| Subject: Re: Forgotten Tue Jan 22, 2008 5:15 pm | |
| You should set this to music. It'd make a great folk song. | |
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Maxis
Number of posts : 2898 Age : 32 Localisation : Raccoon City Registration date : 2006-12-30
| Subject: Re: Forgotten Tue Jan 22, 2008 6:17 pm | |
| Thank you guys^.^ The idea just jumped out at me ....and hit me in the face >.> | |
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FFF
Number of posts : 393 Age : 33 Localisation : Royal Mountain... figure it out ;P Registration date : 2007-05-28
| Subject: Re: Forgotten Tue Jan 22, 2008 8:35 pm | |
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