A Wolf's Howl (an new epic song/poem)

Yes I know this isn't the music spot but I think this song is important and everyone should read and maybe respond to it. It's a song about myself and what I feel in my mind and how much I have changed after meeting you all and coming here and its dedicated to you all especially those who need help and love and have been or going through any hard times and not trying to single anyone out but just using examples like our dear members Kiru, Jawshy, Link, Zan and whoever else needs it. This song/poem is in four parts so I hope you all enjoy reading (warning part I maybe be a little graphic and violent)

Part I: Pain
Part II: Sanctuary
Part III: Rebirth*
Part IV: Pride

*In Rebirth I go through a memory where Sirius was comforting me and talking to me which helped me change my life around

Part I: Pain

Hey, you staring at me
Cannot you see I am incomplete
Don't you see the pain in my eyes
Though people are sround, I am so alone!
I sit alone in my dark room, lost in my mind
My only refuge from the endless onslaught of pain
I get down on my knees andpray tonight!

Oh God!
Please save me from this hell!
I am alone in the darkness
Alone do I suffer
No one knows the pain I endure
I pray my pain, my sins, and my darkness
Die Tonight!

I look in the mirror
I see a monster staring back at me
I hate this abomination I have become
Punching the glass and watching it shatter
My blood flows from my lacerated knuckles
Hitting the floor so rhythmically
Letting my anger flow freely
I feel so alive!

Yet tears run down my face
Anger is such an ironic emotion
Its like a double edged sword
I feel so good when its released
Yet my pain grows
So I ask you
Is it worth the Price!?
For it only causes more pain and insanity
No matter what though I will survive!

Alone I stand in the dark
Reform in my mind like an atom bomb
waiting to explode
I will end this worthless situation
Through my pain and suffering
I repent and start life anew!

Part II: Sanctuary "The Furr Den"

I start my journey for a new life
The world vast with new lands and teh uknown
Searching for my place to call home
I tread across many terrains only seeing war and destruction
Why does this look so familiar
I don't see war and unstability
I serach on!

One night I stumble upon this magical land
Full of cuddly animals and mythical creatures
Who live in peace and harmony and don't wish harm
They all just frolic and play living life to its fullest
My presence doesn't seem to to bother them as I approach
They all look up at me with lovely smiles as they sing

Come with us to the promised land
we will guide you, just give us your hand
no more worries for you to comprehend
Just good times and happiness wait for you our friend
Its looks like you have travled quite awhile
Come and rest and let your dreams make you smile

Oh I see I have found my new home
A Place where I can finally be me
I have found my sanctuary
A place where the sky is the limit
Your dreams are appreciated here
There isn't such a thing as prejudice or crime
Just great people who wish you teh best
as I fall asleep I still here them sing

Come with us to the promised land
we will guide you, just give us your hand
no more worries for you to comprehend
Just good times and happiness wait for you our friend
Its looks like you have travled quite awhile
Come and rest and let your dreams make you smile

Part III: Rebrith

I stand before you all to say
Thank you for all you have done
You made me feel like I am special
You all offered me a place to be
You made me ever so happy
Now, I know I found a home where I xan be me

Through all the hard times
You were her for me
Never given the cold shoulder
I came to you and your arms were wide open
Given a loving embrace, I looked up to you
You gave me a warm smile in return and told me

It will be okay now
Let me take all the pain away
You will feel all better now
But listen to me carefully
You need to stop throwing yourself away
Believe in yourself and the truth will set you free (The truth is the way!)

I listened to you and decided enough was enough
You were right as I took a glimpse at my soul
I still held on the past but I must let it go
My soul still tainted with the poison of hate
Yet you still guided me back when I went astray
Now because of you I am free and here to stay

Now, the rest of you don't worry
I love you guys so much and you are very important to me
I rather have this lovely family
than my dysfunctional blood family
I love you all as you all do me
I will look into all your eyes and say
May our family bond be forever strong
Our love last eternity long!

Part IV: Pride

I admit I have made mistakes
No one is perfect but its time to man up
Forgiven for my sins I turn a new leaf
As I can see my life is changinf for the better
I look toward the future and see bright things ahead

Although I am not invincible
My love and strength is unbelievable
As I am almost pure again and today I am born again
Set upon the right path I don't travel alone
I have company on the journey called Life

Love is more than a four lettered word
It is a bond like no other
Which allows happiness to shine
Our light on a rainy day
It helped change my life and made me feel again

I fall to my knees now
and let out the Wolf's Howl
As my pride allows me to cry
Tears of joy running down my face freely
As the soul a child flows through me
and the goodness in my heart is relased!

Now to the rest of you in a siliar situation
Never lose hope and don't throw yourself away
A wise thing a friend once told me and I pass it on to you
For it is true my brother and sisters
Life is very precious and should not be wasted
You have potential and its time to relase it

No matter the situation giving up is not the answer
I needed help as you did so fear not you aren't alone
Remember you all have a voice, let it be heard
This is a sanctuary full of people and friends who care
Never give up your hope and continue dreaming of happiness
Now go show off your pride and be who you are meant to be!

Very well-written. Depressing at first but the middle and last parts were enlightening. Well done sweetie, well done. Mommy's proud ^^