StarTrek New Beginings RP.

Alrighty then Lets get doing this thing. This RP will take place on a newly built Federation Ship which has been dubbed the Endeavor. The ship is like the Enterprise a ship of exploration with a full array of labs and scientific equipment. The ship is also just as well armed as the Enterprise and has a similar hull configuration. Now here's my character. I'll be taking the first officer position. Which means we'll need a captain not to mention other positions filled.

Name: Ashau.
Age: 18 although due to being mostly Vulcan looks younger.
Species: Vulcan Betazoid hybrid. 3/4ths Vulcan and 1/4th Betazoid.
Position: First officer and ranking science officer.
Appearance: There's a pic of him.
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/2276809/
Bio: Ashau is a bright individual who graduated top of his class in all fields. However he's done exceptionally well in scientific fields. Ashau like most Vulcans practices emotion suppression however only to a point. He's learned that his emotions can be useful. Being part Betazoid though has granted him with stronger then normal mental abilities then either of his parent species. Ashau has powerful telepathy as well as telekinesis. He's a fairly kind individual and tries to be as nice as he can to others. As for his diapers well Ashau here has a bit of a gene disorder due to his hybrid nature.

Name:D'Nal Vorta-Vor Lareth
Age: 23
Species: Romulan
Position: Security officer
Sex: Male
Appearance: Small Flashing lights just above his right eye. He has heavy scaring from being attacked as a child, for being Romulan.

Bio: D'Nal was born in the federation when his parents defected from the Romulan Empire. He grew up on earth and grew up hating the Romulans for being sneaky. That drove him to join Star Fleet help fight against them. Growing up on earth he became a very quite person always being treated as an outsider. He is an expert in hand to hand combat and phase weapons. Part of his brain was damaged in a training accident and that part was replaced with a computer. He had the replacement modified to link wirelessly with computers allowing him to control multiple computers at once. The damage from the training accident has left him fully urinary incontinent.

Name: Saki Vashtal
Age: 17
Species: Trill
Position: Cadet- medical
Sex: Male- cross-dresses hence 'she'
Appearance: (Avatar in a female star fleet uniform- no moggy ears and spots)
Bio: Born on trill and raised to be a host. Saki was normal host nominee, intelligent, healthy and curious. Saki's mother was part the crew of the U.S.S Chesterfield a research vessel that frequented the beta quadrant and Saki often went along as an extra hand. during an accident involving pirates when Saki was 15. the Chesterfield was destroyed and many crew including Tyranus Vashtal, the ships chief scientist where injured or killed. with the only trill in the shuttle being Saki who was flying the shuttle at the time... his mother having escaped on another shuttle. so after a "you'll be fine laddie" from the chief medical officer and a whack on the head because the anesthetic dispenser was broken...Saki Vashtal was born... with a headache to rival a hangover

the implantation was not without its hickups however... not long after the implantation Saki's personality changed faster than anticipated. he became more feminine as his conscious struggled to balance out with the symbiont inside taking on many of the aspects and habits of the former hosts all of them female... he/she felt more natural in feminine clothing. while she is trained in medical technology she is a naturally gifted pilot who is said to be able to handle a shuttle or fighter like a surgeon handles a scalpel. she is imfamous within the academy for causing the early retirement of several flight instructors as well as telling stories of her old hosts... her instructors often say she is 'wisely mischevious' taking great pleasure in knowing how to wind people up

Name: Kiriko
age: 22
Species: Acamarian
Position: Captain
Gender: Male
Appearance:kind of looks like this but is Male http://memory-alpha.org/en/wiki/Acamarian has a t-shirt and black pants.
Bio: although not much is known about where on his planet he was born he is known for being quite the adventurer. although he's captain he goes on adventures quite a bit. he's very smart. which helps alot if they're in danger. he was asked to be captain by the federation. he needed a good crew and thought maybe he could be of use to the Endeavour.

(Um Yeah David I've already got a mostly vulcan character for myself and well it'd be unlikely to have another vulcan on the ship as their essentially an endangered species now.)

OK anyway let's start this puppy up.

Ashau sat in the first officer's seat on the bridge looking over the latest scans that were coming in form a nearby nebula. The nebula had a protostar already and there were already a few planets forming. Some of which seemed like they had the potential to be M-class worlds later down the road. But probably not in a lifetime of anyone on the ship however.

*Kiriko was watching the viewing screen for anything unusual*
Kiriko: nothing of the ordinary.

(David stop. For one I agree with Kais. 16 is much too young to be captain of a federation starship. Also the Boray are a DELTA quadrant species so you'd need to explain how the heck he got here to the alpha quadrant especially considering there hasn't been any contact with it from our end of the galaxy. Plus there isn't a picture of the Boray. They were simply mentioned once in one episode of Voyager. So nobody knows what one looks like. Here's a list from Memory alpha of various species native to the Alpha and Beta Quadrants. You can pick a raise from there but just remember depending on the species you may need to explain how the individual ended up in StarFleet.)

http://memory-alpha.org/en/wiki/Alpha_and_Beta_Quadrant_species

(And also please use some better writing and make your post longer. Notice how long my post was. Yours should be of similar length.)

D'Nal stood at the security station monitoring the ships various ships defensive and offensive weaponry. D'Nal begins running several scans of the area monitoring them with his implant. D'Nal shifts slightly with a small crinkle and blushes. he looks down at his crotch and says to his self "We can travel many times faster than the speed of light but we can't come up with anything better than diapers."

*sorry*

(Ug. David did you read the data on this? The Ba'ku aren't space fairing! They have no ships and at this time in the canon have yet o make contact with the federation in any way. You need to read through these and take your time.)

*O.K. I know for sure the species I picked this time has a way to get to the federation because I remember there being 1 because she's seen a lot on TNG. and if I don't get it right this time then I quit, nothing against you Lig, its just that I haven't seen Star Trek in along time. if I don't have it right I just don't think I'll get it right. sorry *

(Ah now that works. The species is space fairing and native to the alpha quadrant. So this one works well enough. Sorry to get on your case it's just well the first one you chose was one never seen and the other was one that lacked the technology needed. We're good now.)

Ashau heard the comment from his security officer leans back looking over the scan data. "Well that's just the way life is it seems. I can feed strip a photon topedo in five minutes or less yet I am unable to master such a simple thing as a toilet. That's life for you. At least these today are high quality." He pointed out going over his scan data moving and crinkling a bit. "And yes captain quite boring. But at least the nebula is of some interest."

Kiriko: sure is. beautiful huh? so what's our status thus far? anything living there or is it uninhabitable?