Here it goes: Zan's Story

Here goes my first story hope you like it and give me feed back.
Also if anyone would like to be in it let me know I only have this planned

Zan's Story
Part 1

Go away!

Why can't you be like them?!

For my birthday I wish you would just leave.

Why do you continue to be a freak?

"NOOOOOOOOO!!!" A Folf wakes up from his sleep, screaming and panting

Huff...huff...huff

Man why am I only dreaming of the bad times...oh I'm in the bad times of course. I hope things change soon, I don't really care how but I hope it does.

"Boy get out here!" An aged wolf shouts from the other side of the door.

*Sighs* At least I didn't wet the bed this time.
"Yes father I'll be right out," The Folf replies as he rushes to his drawers and strips his sleep clothes to put the new ones on.

Might as well go face the music, I hope I get out of here soon...

The Folf opens the door and looks at the Wolf in a submissive tone,"Is there anything you need from me Father?"

"We're going out for the day, and you Zan need to get lost. I don't care where you go but don't be home when we leave or we get back, we'll call you," The wolf said in an annoyed tone,"Got it?"

"Yes sir," Zan said in compliance, getting his phone and watch and walking fastly out of the house to his best friends house across the way.

God it's great to be out of here for now at least I can still get away most days, I don't have to be there for all day at least.

Zan knocks on the door and waits...

Part 1 end

Aww, poor little Zan. Hope something good happens to him soon! Nice start, keep writing!

I like what I've read so far. It's a bit short but it's good non the less.

m-more MOOOORREE!

There will be kiru, trust meh
For now I have a new story up and coming (that ironically started as an english assignment and I turned the first part in as one)