Fantasy's Perfection

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That was 15 different levels of epic. I can't wait for more of this.

Sai "Sevii-kun" Hanazuru wrote:

That was 15 different levels of epic. I can't wait for more of this.

*blushes* Thanks

hehe, wow, this story is great. I was not expecting the twist from nice and calm to creepy cool. Again, great story.

Shade_Koopa wrote:

hehe, wow, this story is great. I was not expecting the twist from nice and calm to creepy cool. Again, great story.

Thanks ^ ^

Finally got to reading this again. I really wanna go and cuddle that fox but I'm worried he might not like that so much. I was crying for the little guy alot there so you did fantastic!

Riolu wrote:

Finally got to reading this again. I really wanna go and cuddle that fox but I'm worried he might not like that so much. I was crying for the little guy alot there so you did fantastic!

Thanks! And Noah is not much of a cuddler

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Darn, you make some evil character bio's... Anyhow, I noticed that many of the characters you introduced are no regular furrs. It could be just me, but I think all of them are actually pokémon. The description of the mouse brother kind of gave that away.
Right, the little knowledge I have about Pokémon allowed me to figure out the pokéspecies of Cody and his siblings, Sam, Ryan and Timmy, and a good guess for Keith.
However, I still have no idea about Kai. More important, I assume Noah is a pokémon, too, although I can't think of a pokémon that looks like a skunk/fox hybrid. It's not a Lucario, since that's a jackal, so what is it?

Back to the story: this continuation was very interesting. However, this part was kind of long, and you introduced a lot of characters. Second, those dreams Noah has are kind of bugging me. I hope at least YOU know where, when and how you're going to reveal what's wrong with that left eye of him. I like that eye, though. Interesting that he sees everyting inverted with that, except people. Makes me think of a character from my own work...

Hector wrote:

Darn, you make some evil character bio's... Anyhow, I noticed that many of the characters you introduced are no regular furrs. It could be just me, but I think all of them are actually pokémon. The description of the mouse brother kind of gave that away.
Right, the little knowledge I have about Pokémon allowed me to figure out the pokéspecies of Cody and his siblings, Sam, Ryan and Timmy, and a good guess for Keith.
However, I still have no idea about Kai. More important, I assume Noah is a pokémon, too, although I can't think of a pokémon that looks like a skunk/fox hybrid. It's not a Lucario, since that's a jackal, so what is it?

Back to the story: this continuation was very interesting. However, this part was kind of long, and you introduced a lot of characters. Second, those dreams Noah has are kind of bugging me. I hope at least YOU know where, when and how you're going to reveal what's wrong with that left eye of him. I like that eye, though. Interesting that he sees everyting inverted with that, except people. Makes me think of a character from my own work...

No, only Sam, Cody, Ryan, Timmy, Kai, and Keith are pokemon. Noah is just a skunk/fox.

Yes I plan to reveal what happened to his eye....a long time from now. But why are the dreams bugging you?

Well, 'bugging' might be the wrong word. It's just that I use dreams (and everything that resembles dreaming) in all my work, but I still can't seem to put the pieces of this jigsaw at the right place. The whole image is still a bit of a chaos to me. All I have are the cornerpieces: Noah has been in a burning building, where the smoke damaged his voice, and he somehow survived. Still no explaination concerning how he became a hybrid and what made his eye to what it is now.
I'm right on top of this one, brother.

Hector wrote:

Well, 'bugging' might be the wrong word. It's just that I use dreams (and everything that resembles dreaming) in all my work, but I still can't seem to put the pieces of this jigsaw at the right place. The whole image is still a bit of a chaos to me. All I have are the cornerpieces: Noah has been in a burning building, where the smoke damaged his voice, and he somehow survived. Still no explaination concerning how he became a hybrid and what made his eye to what it is now.
I'm right on top of this one, brother.

Well true, but it is just the beginning of the story and I plan to make it "long" one. Though I thought I put hints about his eye in the first paragraph of part 8?

Yush, you did... And I'm still eager to find out whatever happened.

By the way, you're not trying to compete with me concerning who of us is more evil, are you?

Hector wrote:

Yush, you did... Hell, you're not trying to compete with me concerning who of us is more evil, are you?

Are you talking about dark plots? If so, Illusionary Wings is much darker

I'm right on top of that one as well and I got to admit that you might be right.

Just wondering: if you write stories this evil WITHOUT any humans featuring, what would it be like if there were humans included? Would that be Hell's vestibule?
On the other hand, this not an annoying level of evil. As long as I don't hear Fenrir cry, you're still in the 'safe' zone

Hector wrote:

I'm right on top of that one as well and I got to admit that you might be right.

Just wondering: if you write stories this evil WITHOUT any humans featuring, what would it be like if there were humans included? Would that be Hell's vestibule?
On the other hand, this not an annoying level of evil. As long as I don't hear Fenrir cry, you're still in the 'safe' zone

Well humans aren't the only evil beings, Kin (as I call them) can be evil too. But with humans it would be just as evil....now who is Fenrir?

True, in my stories (especially in Scavion), humans aren't the only evil creatures either, although they are the main source.

The fact that you ask me who Fenrir is... is that a sign of:
A. Me failing to explain properly
B. You not reading my stories
C. You reading my stories, but not paying attention while doing so
D. You trying to thwart her?

Hector wrote:

True, in my stories (especially in Scavion), humans aren't the only evil creatures either, although they are the main source.

The fact that you ask me who Fenrir is... is that a sign of:
A. Me failing to explain properly
B. You not reading my stories
C. You reading my stories, but not paying attention while doing so
D. You trying to thwart her?

No it's a sign that I have a terrible memory when it comes to names. She was the spirit lady, right?

Ah, right. I have that characteristic myself as well, but only for RL people. Anyhow, Fenrir is a black (feral) wolf, named after a creature from Niflheim in Norse mythology. She is the Mythic of fire and serves Nergion, the emperor of Cathalia (which is a mild version of Hell, also comparable to life here on Earth).
As stated in The Bargain, she comes to take the souls and spirits of those that follow here, as well as a part of the sick and the old. She is also to be seen before and/or after a catastrophe.

Hector wrote:

Ah, right. I have that characteristic myself as well, but only for RL people. Anyhow, Fenrir is a black (feral) wolf, named after a creature from Niflheim in Norse mythology. She is the Mythic of fire and serves Nergion, the emperor of Cathalia (which is a mild version of Hell, also comparable to life here on Earth).
As stated in The Bargain, she comes to take the souls and spirits of those that follow here, as well as a part of the sick and the old. She is also to be seen before and/or after a catastrophe.

Okay, got it

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Neat story dude,you know your eye thing reminds me of something..... its called Geass from anime called Code Geass but yeah i really like your story and like the direction it is going in