Ok this story is from my past just names changed.
CH 1 THE APPEARANCE OF KARI
A young girl who appeared to be only thirteen years old enters the town. Her name is Kari but is more commonly known as Ryuga. She is five foot six with long and flowing crimson hair that accents her blue eyes. She wear a black robe that is trimmed in crimson and she keeps it pulled tight on her body a 18” katana at her side. She may appear to be full human but she is not she is part fox and part human. Ryuga slowly walks down the streets of this dull, dark and glomy town with her bag thrown over her shoulder. A young girl and her mother walk towards ryuga. “Kari is that you” asks the woman. “yes it is me aunt Skaela and hello there cousin Kaela.” Says kari sort of crying. “whats wrong kari” they asks wantin to help her. “I wet myself” she says blushing.