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Light The Fox

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PostSubject: Darkness Will Uncover The Truth   Sat Jan 08, 2011 2:44 am

(please give your thoughts on this)

‘’Damn it!!’’ Black yelled. He was running down the street. The group of ??? trailed behind him closely. ‘’Quith Black we order you to stop!!’’ The group yelled. ‘’Hmm,let me think……NO!!!’’ He yelled. ‘Stupid Police’ he thought. ‘All I did was run away a few years back and have been stealing things…I mean really whats up with them?’ He questioned himself at the end. ‘’Quith,when we said surrender there was not an option it was either that or dying.’’ The officer at the front of the group yelled. Black stood tall. He smirked. ‘’Whats with the grin boy?’’ The cop asked.

‘’Because I’m not the one who’s trapped now.’’ Black said in a cocky tone. ‘’Wha-What the **** just happened….’’ The cops asked themselves. ‘’A second ago he was cornered??’’

One cop took his chance and tried shooting at Black.*Bang!* ‘’Damn you,Arigato!’’ Black yelled as the bullet wounded his shoulder. ‘’I’m sorry old friend… but peasants like you don’t deserve to live!!’’ Arigato the head officer of the group yelled. ‘’Your right kataki…. I don’t deserve to…..’’ Black said. He took out a gun and held it to his head. ‘’But if I die it will be by my own hands!’’ Black had gone insane.

‘’You fool you’ve gotten akane!!!’’ Arigato yelled. ‘’You cannot cause your own eimin!!’’
‘’I can and I will I don’t even care if I go to makai!!’’ Black yelled getting akane.
‘’Men, charge and stop this madness and stop Kuro Quith!!’’ Arigato yelled out his orders.
‘’Ta,Ta, Feng Arigato……’’ Black started to pull the trigger. ‘’Let this be my parting gift and never let our friendship break….’’ Black threw a necklace that had a diamond in the middle.A ruby,sapphire,and an emerald surrounding it then to hold the gems together was a piece of obsidian. ‘’Let it be my parting gift…’’ The bullet shot out of the gun. It killed Black on contact. His body fell lifelessly to the ground.


Darkness surrounded him. ‘’Young, stupid, foolish, naïve, and kind hearted is what describes this child.’’ A group of people in black robes were staring at Black’s lifeless corpse. ‘’Should we let this boy re-live his life in our world.’’ Asked a hooded one. ‘’Of course we will.’’ Said the one that was probably the elder. ‘’This boy has a hidden history and we are to uncover it!!’’ The elder yelled.

Heres a link to all the japaneesy words

http://sheyasan.tripod.com/html/dictionary.html
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PostSubject: Re: Darkness Will Uncover The Truth   Sun Jan 09, 2011 8:30 pm

Anybody even like this?
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PostSubject: Re: Darkness Will Uncover The Truth   Thu Jan 20, 2011 5:34 pm

Chappie 2 is almost done!!!
If you care you will post a comment saying YAY!
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PostSubject: Re: Darkness Will Uncover The Truth   Thu Jan 20, 2011 8:57 pm

Hmmm... kind of hard to get an opinion yet. Seems a little rushed and short so far. I don't see why not having another post though.
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